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Re: Baqiyyah's Lilies
Hi Snoink! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. :) So, I know you showed me this poem earlier, and were all asking me about it. So ...
Oct 1, 2009 -
Re: A Dutiful Bride
Hi there, alurie. I am Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer today. I really like your style of writing here. I mean, I really really like it. It's ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: The Conquest of Dr. Vorst (rated R)
Hi Fortuna. I'm Conrad Rice and I will be your reviewer for tonight. Well, after having looked at this, I don't really see what the point to it is. It ...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Archives
Hi Gahks! I'm Conrad Rice, and I shall be your reviewer. I liked this poem. That should make you feel very afraid, because if I tend to like a work ...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: The White Room (Warning: Graphic Imagery)
Hi Snoink! You wanted me to take a look at this, so here I am. Let me start off by saying that although there is a lot of sensational and ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Chronicles of the Abandoned, Part 2
Hi there, Tassen. My name is Conrad, and I will be your reviewer for today. The first thing I notice about this is that you seem to have a problem ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Angels
Hi Jetpack! :) While a bit hard to understand, as you talked about, I did rather like this story. Though, it's rather not really a story, more a short sketch ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: An Iron Sea pt. 6
Danforth was not at his room. His roommate, an engineer named Juarez, said that he had gone off to the bowling alley with some other biologists a while ago. They ...
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: The Virus - 1
Hi ThornedRose. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. All right. I have to say that you do have a very interesting premise here, one that has ...
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: Anubis
Hey Kylan. Sorry I haven't gotten around to this until now. But I'm here, and I'll get my thoughts on this pounded out for you. So, as I told you ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: Ever After [3]
Hi Rosey! I'm just popping in for a quick review. So, a satisfiable and enjoyable conclusion to a nice story. Overall, I have to give this good marks. While it's ...
Aug 15, 2009 -
Re: Deadly Dreams.
Hi LilliexAnnuh! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, why is all the dialogue in bold? There doesn't seem to be any good reason for it, ...
Aug 14, 2009 -
Re: Ever After [2]
So Rosey, I'm going to try to get this done before I go to bed. :) It's a good continuation of your previous part. I do rather like it, especially ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Ever After [1]
Finally got here. :P So, I did like this story. In fact, I like it so much that I don't know if I will be able to come up with ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Elephant Keeper -- pt. 1
So, Kylan, here I am, as duly promised. So, I think the first two parts of this are pretty good. You need to work on your character voice, as we ...
Aug 8, 2009
